Elements that need improving

• Gaps 
• Lip syncing 
• Colour correct
• Title on the rose footage needs to be smoother
• Blank spaces between the synced clips (easily edited)
• Dancing scenes are too grainy
• Need more of a variety of footage 
• Transactions 

Elements that worked well

Reading back though the feedback from my class i gathered what elements worked well from their feedback sheets

• Shadows
• Silhouettes
• Layering 
• Flower footage 
• Performance (clear clean sharp and bright)
• Various angles
• Good cinematography 
• The footage links together well 

Analysed feedback

I did have a lot of blank spaces with no footage, i knew this would be picked up on as there was as lot so i knew i had to start with filming some new footage. Plus it also said that i had to adjust the effects that i had already applied, i needed to play around with the levels and brightness as it looked off colour and would look better in black and white like some of the other footage.